The charts below show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015.
The pie charts compare how local government spending was allocated across nine sectors in 2010 and 2015.
Overall, education, healthcare, and pensions consistently accounted for the largest shares in both years, though education and welfare spending decreased, while transport saw an increase.
In 2010, education made up the largest portion of spending at 24%, followed by healthcare (21%) and pensions (19%). Welfare accounted for 17%, while transport and defense made up 8% and 5%, respectively. Smaller proportions were spent on culture and leisure (3%), borrowing interest (2%), and other sectors (1%).
By 2015, education and healthcare spending dropped slightly to 21% and 20%, while pensions remained stable at 19%. Welfare saw a significant reduction to 13%, whereas transport rose to 10%. Other categories, including defense, culture and leisure, and borrowing interest, experienced minor changes.
The essay is well-organized and logically structured. It effectively compares the data from the two years and uses linking words to show contrast and development.
Suggestions
- Consider using more varied linking phrases to enhance flow.
The vocabulary is appropriate and varied, though there is room for more sophisticated word choices.
The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures with few errors.
The essay addresses all parts of the task and provides a clear overview of the main trends and differences.
Suggestions
- Ensure that all data mentioned is accurate and relevant to the task.