The charts below show the distribution of the world's water and the use of water in three countries.
The chart illustrates the information about the distribution of water and how water is utilize in three countries.
Overall, it is clear that a majority of all water is salt water, while fresh water is less uses compered to all water. Additionally, Egypt, Saudi Arabia and Canada figure accounted for the highest presentage with agriculture of water, while Egypt uses water in industry witnessed the smallest rate rather that Saudi Arabia and Canada.
The first chart shows that 97% of the all water is saltwater, leaving only 3% as fresh water. 79% is experienced ice and glaciers, 20% is groundwater, and only 1% is surface water. This provided that uses of fresh water is extremely less.
The second chart compares water usage in Egypt, Saudi Arabia, and Canada. In Egypt and Saudi Arabia accounted for over 80% of water is used for agriculture. In contrast, Canada uses the majority of its water for industrial saw exacly the same rate with Egypt around 80%. However agriculture accounts for a much smaller percentage with 10 % in all countries.
The essay presents information in a generally clear manner but lacks logical progression and clear connections between sentences and ideas.
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The essay uses a limited range of vocabulary with some inaccuracies and repetition.
The essay contains frequent grammatical errors, affecting clarity and coherence.
The essay addresses the task but lacks detailed explanation and contains inaccuracies.
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