The charts below show the distribution of the world's water and the use of water in three countries.
The pie charts illustrate the distribution of water across the globe, while the bar chart shows the usage of water among the three nations.
Overall, it is clear from the chart that undrinkable water is the biggest proportion, whereas fresh water is the least. According to the table, the vast majority of water is used for agricultural purposes in Egypt and Saudi Arabia, yet Canada uses water mostly for industries.
The first pie chart shows that only 3% of the water is drinkable, but 97% is salt water, which means it is not in use. For example, when it comes to fresh water in the second pie chart, they are divided into three. First, ground water accounts for 20%; however, surface water is unlikely to be 1%; the majority of ice glaciers show 79%.
When it comes to the table, the most usage of water is spent for agricultural purposes, mainly by two countries, showing a mover of 70%. However, domestic and industrial are about 11%. Unlilly Canada uses subsantial amount of money on industry but approximately agricultural purposes and domestic usage.
The essay presents information in a logical order but lacks clarity in some areas. Transitions between ideas could be smoother.
Suggestions
- Use linking words to connect ideas more clearly.
- Ensure each paragraph has a clear main idea.
- Avoid abrupt transitions between sections.
The essay uses a range of vocabulary but with some inaccuracies and repetition.
The essay contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity and accuracy.
The essay addresses the task but with some inaccuracies and lacks detailed comparison.
Suggestions
- Provide more specific data from the charts.
- Ensure all key features are compared and contrasted.
- Avoid inaccuracies in data interpretation.