the charts below show the percentage of students at an adult education centre taking various courses offered in 1985 and this year
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of students enrolling different courses at Continuing education center in the years 1985 and 2025.
Overall, music appreciation and local history courses replaced by one of the white-collar fields, IT courses, in 2025 while fitness and dance remained constant in both years. Other fields:Art, modern languages, and cookery showed minute change.
By 1985, 17% of people attended Art classes while most popular programs were modern languages: french, german and spanish and fitness and dance that people joined 24% and 22% respectively.15% and 14% of students registered historical and cooking lessons. The most few people took part in musical education.
Currently, fewer people are studying in the art field and modern languages compared to the statistics of 1985, 15% and 17% respectively.One of the modern fields, IT, has taken the place of musical and historical enrollments. Most people are attending to this program, apporximately 27%. And more teenagers are joining cooking trainings compared to latter year, it is 19%.
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