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The charts below show the percentage of volunteers by organizations in 2008 and 2014.

The pie charts give information about the proportion of volunteers by facility between 2008 and 2014.
Overall, what stands out from the charts is that while healthcare and environmental organizations only experienced considerable growth, the rest of the organizations showed a decline. Another interesting point is that, although healthcare had been the least preferred in 2008, this figure was the second highest at the end of the period.
In detail, healthcare was the least preferred organization, with 7% of volunteers initially, and it increased significantly to 25% in 2014. Similarly, before growing significantly to 34% in 2014, the percentage of volunteers in environmental organizations showed 21% in 2008.
In contrast, both other organizations and educational organizations experienced a decrease in the proportion of people volunteering in them. After undergoing a slight decline to 9% in 2014, volunteers in other facilities were at an average level of 15% at the initial period. In 2008, despite being the most preferred organization at 24%, educational organizations were the least preferred at the end of the period, with 8% of volunteers.
In 2008, art started at 15% volunteers, and this slightly declined to 12% in 2014. Similarly, the percentage of volunteers in sports was18% initially, and it finished at 12% in 2014.

7.5

The essay is logically organized with a clear overall progression. Information is presented in a coherent manner with appropriate use of linking words.

Suggestions
  • Use more varied linking phrases.
  • Ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea.

The essay demonstrates a good range of vocabulary with some precise word choices. However, there is room for more variety.

The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures with minor errors.

The essay effectively addresses the task, summarizing the key trends and changes in the data.