The diagram below shows how recycled paper is made.
The picture provides information about how to make recycled paper. Overall, there are four main stages involved in this process: making pulp, filtering, cleaning and making paper. Also, the process is a simple one, which does not require much time and equipment to complete.
The first stage of the process starts when the used paper is transferred by conveyor belt in a form of unfiltered pulp into a large pot filled with water and special chemicals. After being mixed with the liquid, the pulp is then filtered so that it can be polished more easily.
At the next stage, filtered pulp is poured into the basin stacked with water, soap and air. There is a tube inside the basin used for extracting ink from the filtered paper. After which it is conveyed to a mechanism which consists of chemical liquids. Once purified, the cleaned pulp is poured to the conveyor belt where heated rollers flatten it, causing the water evaporate.
The essay presents a clear sequence of the paper recycling process, but some transitions are abrupt.
Suggestions
- Use more linking words to improve flow.
- Clarify the sequence of stages more explicitly.
- Ensure each stage is clearly distinct.
The vocabulary used is appropriate but lacks variety.
The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures with minor errors.
The essay effectively describes the process and covers all stages.
Suggestions
- Ensure each stage is adequately detailed.