The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps provides the information about the layout of the common library with it appearing 20 years ago and how it looks now .
Overall , the library experienced dramatic changes throughout the period , providing it with new technologies and opening special computer room.
20 years ago there were tables and chairs in the centre of the library that had been demolished now. Children’s books that had been located in the right upper corner in the past , had moved to the left top corner where also happen storytelling events now . Instead of children’s book there is lecture room created today.
The area underwent significant transformation, with enquiry desk being replaced by cafe and reading room by computer room . Adult fiction book that used to be in the left side is located in the right side now where also developed with self-service machines and information desk. Instead of adult fiction books there is all reference books located now
The essay presents information in a logical order but lacks clear linking phrases.
Suggestions
- Use more linking words to connect ideas.
- Ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea.
- Improve transitions between sentences.
The vocabulary is adequate but lacks variety and precision.
Frequent grammatical errors affect clarity and precision.
The response addresses the task but lacks some detail and clarity.
Suggestions
- Include more specific comparisons and details.
- Ensure all main features are clearly described.