The diagram below shows the various stages involved in publishing a book .Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make compressions where relevant
The diagram gives detailed information about the process in which the book is published
Overall, it is clear that there are 9 steps in the production of book , starting with writing and ending with distributing to the bookshops .It is also worth mentioning that the process requires both machine-driven and manual jobs to get the end-product .
The process begin with writing , and then book send to publishing houses. Next stages the book is studied by editors, and it is contract made with publishing house .Following this, the book is designed of layout. After which a final decision on layout is made for the book
In the subsequent stage, the books is printed and then it is binded .In the finally stage, the book is distributed to bookshops
The essay follows a logical sequence but lacks clear linkage between some stages. Some transitions are abrupt, affecting the flow.
Suggestions
- Use linking words to connect stages clearly.
- Ensure each step is described in a logical order.
- Avoid abrupt transitions between stages.
The vocabulary is basic and repetitive. Some terms are inaccurately used.
Frequent grammatical errors affect clarity. Issues with verb forms and sentence structure are present.
The essay covers the main stages but lacks detailed explanations and some stages are not clearly described.
Suggestions
- Provide more details for each stage.
- Ensure all steps in the diagram are covered.
- Clarify the role of each stage in the process.