The diagram illustrates how recycled paper is made
The diagram below shows how recycled paper is produced. Overall, there four main stages involved in this process, starting with making pulp and this is followed by filtering. After this, the pulp is cleaned, before the paper is made. Also, the process is a simple one, which doesn’t require much time and equipment to complete.
Initially, the used paper is brought in the boxes on the conveyor belt to water chemicals, where the used paper is turned into the pulp. The pulp is then filtered through utensil with loads of tiny holes where its large and tough pieces are caught. Once filtered, the pulp is washed in the soaped water, and the ink is taken from it. Once cleaned, the pulp is pushed towards water and chemicals using air pressure.
In the final stage, the cleaned pulp is put on to the conveyor belt, which is then pulled by heated rollers so that existing water on the pulp can be leaked. The cleaned pulp is turned from the rugged form into the straight one.
The essay presents a clear sequence of stages in the paper recycling process. However, there are occasional lapses in logical progression and clarity.
Suggestions
- Use more linking words to enhance flow.
- Clarify the sequence of events.
- Ensure consistent use of terms.
The essay uses a range of vocabulary, but there are some inaccuracies and repetitive phrases.
The essay demonstrates a basic range of grammatical structures but contains several errors.
The essay adequately addresses the task, describing the stages of paper recycling. However, some details are inaccurately or vaguely described.
Suggestions
- Ensure all stages are clearly and accurately described.
- Include more specific details from the diagram.