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The diagram illustrates how recycled paper is made

The diagram below shows how recycled paper is produced. Overall, there four main stages involved in this process, starting with making pulp and this is followed by filtering. After this, the pulp is cleaned, before the paper is made. Also, the process is a simple one, which doesn’t require much time and equipment to complete.
Initially, the used paper is brought in the boxes on the conveyor belt to water chemicals, where the used paper is turned into the pulp. The pulp is then filtered through utensil with loads of tiny holes where its large and tough pieces are caught. Once filtered, the pulp is washed in the soaped water, and the ink is taken from it. Once cleaned, the pulp is pushed towards water and chemicals using air pressure.
In the final stage, the cleaned pulp is put on to the conveyor belt, which is then pulled by heated rollers so that existing water on the pulp can be leaked. The cleaned pulp is turned from the rugged form into the straight one.

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The essay has a logical structure with a clear sequence of stages. However, some transitions between stages are abrupt.

Suggestions
  • Use more linking words to improve flow.
  • Ensure each stage is clearly distinct.
  • Avoid repetition of phrases.

The vocabulary used is appropriate but somewhat limited. Some phrases are repetitive.

The essay contains a range of grammatical structures, but there are some inaccuracies.

The essay adequately describes the process of recycling paper with reference to the diagram. However, some details could be more precise.

Suggestions
  • Include more specific details from the diagram.
  • Ensure all stages are clearly and accurately described.