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The diagram illustratres how recycled paper is made and recycled.

The picture shows the process of recycling paper. Overall, the process is complicated, having four main stages. Notably, the recycling paper process commences with collecting used paper and ends with making the paper using heated rollers.
First of all, used paper is put onto a conveyor belt, a mechanical system that moves items from one place to another. Then, in the second step, the used paper is mixed with water chemicals in a pulping machine, where the pulp, a soft material of an object, is made. After that, the mixed pulp is sifted to remove larger particles, resulting in filtered pulp, which is the first two stages of the procedure.
In the following step, the cleaning process undergoes. Through a tube, the filtered pulp is poured into a bath-shaped large dish where it is mixed with water and soap. Air is introduced to help remove ink and other contaminants, which results in cleaned chemicals stored in a box-shaped container. In the eventual steps, the chemicals pass through heated rollers on the conveyor belt, making recycled paper in the form of rollers.

6.5

The essay generally follows a logical sequence, but some transitions between stages are unclear.

Suggestions
  • Use more linking words to enhance flow.
  • Clarify the sequence of stages.
  • Ensure each stage is distinctly described.

The essay uses a range of vocabulary with some precision, though some word choices could be improved.

The essay generally maintains grammatical accuracy, but there are minor errors.

The essay addresses the task and describes the process with reasonable accuracy, though some details are unclear or misrepresented.

Suggestions
  • Ensure accurate representation of each stage.
  • Clarify any ambiguous descriptions.