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The diagram illustratres how recycled paper is made and recycled.

The picture shows the process of recycling paper. Overall, the process is complicated, having four main stages. Notably, the recycling paper process commences with collecting used paper and ends with making the paper using heated rollers.
First of all, used paper is put onto a conveyor belt, a mechanical system that moves items from one place to another. Then, in the second step, the used paper is mixed with water chemicals in a pulping machine, where the pulp, a soft material of an object, is made. After that, the mixed pulp is sifted to remove larger particles, resulting in filtered pulp, which is the first two stages of the procedure.
In the following step, the cleaning process undergoes. Through a tube, the filtered pulp is poured into a bath-shaped large dish where it is mixed with water and soap. Air is introduced to help remove ink and other contaminants, which results in cleaned chemicals stored in a box-shaped container. In the eventual steps, the chemicals pass through heated rollers on the conveyor belt, paving the way for recycled paper in the form of rollers.

6.5

The essay presents a logical sequence of stages but lacks clear transitions between some steps.

Suggestions
  • Use linking words to connect stages.
  • Clarify the sequence of steps.
  • Ensure each stage is clearly distinct.

The essay uses a range of vocabulary related to the process, though some word choices could be improved for precision.

The essay demonstrates a basic range of grammatical structures with some errors.

The essay adequately describes the process and includes most key details.

Suggestions
  • Include more details about each stage.
  • Ensure all steps are accurately described.