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The diagram shows how biofuel called ethanol produced

The diagramm below gives information about the ways of making a biofuel called ethanol is produced. From looking the overall, it is clear that process is consisted of ten main categories. Assambly line is produced by both human-made and natural processes. That ruquires two main sources, sunlight and carbon dioxide. Moreover, vehicles take a part to make ethanol.
Firstly, plants and trees absorb energy which is from sunlight and Carbon Dioxide (CO2). In the following period, grown trees or plants are harvested by vehicles when they are nutritional enough. After that, ready crops are cut into piece by machine, in order to be cellulosed. The next process called “processing”, there yields are added some biochemicals. Before microbes are added for to be unsafe, ingredients are turned into sugar.
At the next steps, ready Ethanol is devided into three different groups (car, truck and air plane) as provides with fuels which are produced naturally. Vehicles transform it into CO2 and that line continues in the long run.

4.5

The essay lacks clear organization and logical progression. Some sentences are disjointed, and the sequence of steps is not well-structured.

Suggestions
  • Use linking words to connect ideas.
  • Ensure each step in the process is clearly described.
  • Avoid jumping between ideas.

The essay uses a limited range of vocabulary with some inaccuracies.

The essay contains frequent grammatical errors, affecting readability.

The essay attempts to describe the process but lacks clarity and completeness.

Suggestions
  • Ensure all steps in the process are covered.
  • Clarify the role of each component in the process.