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The diagram shows how recycled paper is made.

The diagram illustrates hoe recycled paper is produced. Overall, there are six steps in the process of recycling paper, which can be divided into fout main stages: making pulp, filtering, cleaning and preparing paper. It is also clear that this process is complex, which requires some special equipment such as a conveyor belt.
To begin with collecting the used paper, then it is poured into water chemicals through a conveyor belt.
After that, the next stage starts.
Once papers have been mixed with watered chemicals, which is sent to the equipment like a bowl in order to change unfiltered pulp into the filtered ones.
In the following stage, filtered pulp is transferred to the cleaning place, where pulp is washed in soap water in order to extract its ink. After cleaning has been finished, half-recycled paper is taken place in a box, which is mixed with watered chemicals once time.
The final stage takes place in a conveyor belt again, where water pulp is heated and rolled over the conveyor belt. Then, recycled paper can be ready for using.

5.0

The essay attempts to follow the sequence of the diagram, but lacks clear transitions and logical progression between stages.

Suggestions
  • Use clear transitions between stages.
  • Ensure each step is distinctly explained.
  • Avoid abrupt stage changes.

The essay uses basic vocabulary with occasional errors in word choice.

The essay contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity and understanding.

The essay covers the main steps of the process but lacks detail and clarity in some parts.

Suggestions
  • Include more detailed descriptions of each step.
  • Clarify the role of each piece of equipment.