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The diagram shows how to make jam from the fruit.

The diagram shows the process of producing jam from water, sugar and other ingredients. In general, there are seven distinct stages in this process, from the initial cleaning 4 kg of a particular fruit to the eventual getting enjoyment of the jam. It is also clear that the jam production takes less than two hours to be fully completed.
The process begins when 4 kg of fruit on a big container is washed under running water. Once clean, the fruit is mashed through use of a masher. The resulting juice undergoes a 10-minute boiling process at a high temperature. In order for the juice to be more tasty, a cup of water, two tablespoons of peanuts and a quarter cup of sugar is added during the simmering process. Subsequently, the juice is boiled again for 30 minutes at the same temperature and more water and sugar is added.
Stages five and six of the process both involve making the product ready for sale. When the jam is poured into various containers, all containers are closed with a lid and kept for an hour. Finally, the breakfast table is graced with ready-made jam.

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The essay generally follows a logical sequence, but some details are unclear or missing, affecting overall cohesion.

Suggestions
  • Clarify the sequential steps more clearly.
  • Ensure each stage is distinctly described.
  • Use linking words to enhance flow.

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks variety and precision.

The essay shows a reasonable range of grammatical structures, but errors are present.

The response addresses the task but misses some key details and lacks precision in describing the process.

Suggestions
  • Include all ingredients and steps as shown in the diagram.
  • Ensure quantities are accurate.
  • Describe each stage in detail.