The diagram shows how to recycle paper.
The diagram illustrates the steps involved in the production of recycled paper.
Overall, this process consists of four main stages: making pulp, filtering, cleaning, making paper.
Initially, the used paper is collected in boxes and transported on a conveyor belt. From there, they are mixed with water and chemicals to remove any residue. Once the pulp is made, it moves to the next stage where the unfiltered pulp is filtered to seperate unnecessary junk .
The next stage occurs at the cleaning field. Here, the pulp is mixes water and soap. Cleaned pulp appears in this process. At this time, air is continuously introduced to separate the ink from the pulp. Then it is combined with water and chemicals for further cleaning. After removing excess water and chemicals, the pulp is shaped by heated rollers.
Finally at the making paper stage, ready material is dried on conveyor belt to seperate any remaining water. At the end result we can see recycled paper to reuse for various purposes.
The essay follows a logical sequence, but some transitions between stages could be clearer.
Suggestions
- Use more linking words to connect stages.
- Clarify the sequence of steps.
- Ensure each stage is distinctly described.
The vocabulary is adequate but lacks variety. Some words are repeated unnecessarily.
The essay demonstrates a basic range of grammatical structures with some errors.
The essay addresses the task and describes the process adequately, but some details are missing or unclear.
Suggestions
- Include more details about each stage.
- Ensure all parts of the process are covered.