The diagram shows one way of manufacturing ceramic pots.
The picture gives information about the process of producing ceramic pots, which is a complex one, with the majority of steps taking place in the factory and it takes much time and equipment to complete.
The process begins with digging clay by excavator and the clay is then delivered to the factory by truck in order to crush the mud. After being crushed, it is mixed by a special machine in the factory.
The next step is that the mixed mud is sent to the moulds step by step. The following step is that the assembled clay pots are dried in the moulds for 4 to 6 hours before being sent to the special stove. Subsequently, they are heated oven 1000 degrees celsius in it. The last step is that they are coloured and sent to the colour firing before being used the ready ceramic pots.
Finally, you can use them for your daily needs.
The essay generally follows the sequence of the diagram, but lacks clear paragraphing and some transitions.
Suggestions
- Use clear paragraphing to separate different stages.
- Add transitions to improve flow between steps.
The essay uses some appropriate vocabulary but lacks variety.
The essay contains some grammatical errors and lacks complex structures.
The essay covers most steps but lacks detail in some areas.
Suggestions
- Include more detail about each step to fully explain the process.