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The diagram shows one way of manufacturing ceramic pots.

The diagram illustrates the process of producing ceramic pots in several steps. Overall, the production involves three main stages: preparing raw materials and transporting them to factories, shaping and drying the pots, and finally coloring and finishing them.
In the first step, raw materials are excavated using specialized machinery. These materials are then transported to a factory. Once delivered, the raw ceramic undergoes a crushing process. After being crushed, the ceramic is mixed with water to create a liquid mixture, which is then poured into molds for shaping.
The liquid ceramic mixture requires about four to six hours to dry in the molds. Once the drying process is complete, the pots are removed from the molds, assembled, and placed into an oven. Here, they are fired at a high temperature of 1,000 degrees Celsius, which solidifies the pots.
In the final stage, the ceramic pots are colored and finished with various designs, completing the production process.

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The essay is well-organized and follows a logical sequence that aligns with the diagram.

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  • Ensure each stage is clearly detailed to match the diagram.

The essay uses a good range of vocabulary appropriate for describing a process.

The essay demonstrates a good command of grammar with minor errors.

The essay effectively describes the process depicted in the diagram, covering all main stages.