The diagram shows one way of manufacturing ceramic pots.
The illustration shows the process involved in manufacturing ceramic pots.
Overall, the 12 processes to gather ceramic can be divided into three stages: delivering the raw materials, industrial processing and colour processing.
In the first stage, after the engine is solid, it will be delivered to the factory. In the industry stage, the material is crushed and mixed by the machine to advance to the next step It is sent into moulds and waits to dry in 4-6 hours. In next step is the clay pots assembled.
In the colour stage, four different substeps are fundamental to get the final product. Firstly, the clay pot is heated in an oven at 1000 degrees Celsius. Therefore, it is colouring in a new cover. The new colour product is then colour firing. Finally, the ceramic pots are finished and ready for the grocery store.
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The essay presents a basic sequence of the process but lacks clear logical flow and transitions.
Suggestions
- Use clear transitions between stages.
- Clarify the sequence of steps within each stage.
- Ensure each step is logically connected.
The essay uses basic vocabulary with some inaccuracies.
The essay contains some grammatical errors and lacks complex structures.
The essay attempts to cover the process but lacks clarity and detail in several areas.
Suggestions
- Ensure all steps are clearly described and logically ordered.
- Include more details about each stage of the process.