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The diagram shows the process for recycling plastic bottles?

The pictures demonstrate the process of how plastic bottles are recycled. Overall, there are nine steps involved in the process from collecting plastic bottles to producing end products from them.
Turning to the details, the procedure starts with people collecting plastic bottles in a special container. Once the container has been filled with bottles, it is loaded onto a special truck to be delivered to recycling center. Next/In the next stage, plastic bottles are sorted into recyclable and non-recyclable ones. At this point, the bottles suitable for recycling are compressed into a block. The following step is that The process proceeds with blocks being sent to crushing where plastic is converted to tiny pieces and washed. In the next stage, a special machine is used to produce plastic pellets from pieces of plastic after which pellets are heated to form raw materials. Finally, raw materials can now be used to produce various end products such as T-shirt, bags, bottles, pencils and containers. These all above-mentioned stages continue as a cycle to use plastics more efficiently.

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The essay follows a logical sequence and uses linking words effectively. However, some transitions could be smoother.

Suggestions
  • Use varied linking words to enhance flow.
  • Clarify the sequence of events more explicitly.

The vocabulary is appropriate and varied, but there are some repetitions and minor errors.

The essay demonstrates a range of grammatical structures, but contains some errors.

The essay addresses all parts of the task and describes the process accurately.

Suggestions
  • Ensure all steps are clearly described and linked.