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The diagrams give information about changes in a student accommodation.

The maps illustrate how the layouts of student accommodation changed from 2010 by now.
Overall, accommodation witnessed dramatic transformation over the period shown, becoming more modern due to construction of new facilities for students.
In 2010, the hall was bigger and there were two gardens in north and south sides of accommodation. The kitchen was located in the middle next to a bathroom situated above the hall. Accommodation was occupied with three study-bedrooms in north-west, north-east and south-east sides, while in the upper part students could find living room right above the garden.
By now, accommodation experienced extensive developments. One of the most noticeable changes was that living room was removed and replaced with new study-room and one more room is added right under study-bedroom in north-west side. Furthermore, another change was the addition of the new ensuite bathroom, while hall was shortened. Additionally, the room for kitchen now is for social area too. Moreover, it could be also seen, that southern garden was cleared to make space for parking. Despite these changes, the Northern garden remained unchanged, however the way to it was blocked, as a result in order to rich it students should go around an accommodation.

6.0

The essay generally follows a logical structure, but some sentences lack clarity and smooth transitions.

Suggestions
  • Use linking words to improve transitions.
  • Clarify the sequence of changes.
  • Ensure each paragraph has a clear focus.

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks variety. Some expressions are repetitive.

The essay demonstrates a range of grammatical structures, but there are some inaccuracies.

The essay addresses the task and describes the main changes, but some details are not fully developed.

Suggestions
  • Include more specific details about changes.
  • Ensure all key changes in the diagrams are mentioned.