The first chart shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emission which result from this energy use.
The pie charts compare information about the proportion of energy use and greenhouse gas emissions in Australian households.
Overall, although the largest share of energy is used for heating, the majority of greenhouse gas emissions come from water heating. Notably, gas emissions from appliances are significantly higher than their energy consumption.
In terms of specifics, heating accounts for nearly 40% of total energy consumption, making it the largest category of energy use. Water heating follows closely, representing almost a third of total energy usage, placing it in second place on the chart. The proportion of other appliances is relatively lower, accounting for 15%. There is a slight disparity in the figures for lighting and cooling, with the former being 2% higher compared to the latter, at 4% and 2%, respectively. Refrigeration accounts for 7% of energy consumption.
Regarding emitted greenhouse gases, most of the gases originate from water heating, which is 3% higher than other appliances, at 32%. The figures for refrigeration and heating are at around 15% for each, which is nearly two times higher compared to lighting. The lowest proportion of greenhouse gas emissions is from cooling, at just 3%.
The essay is well-organized and logically structured. Information is grouped and presented in a clear manner.
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- Ensure all data points from the charts are accurately represented.
The essay uses a good range of vocabulary with some precision.
The essay demonstrates a high level of grammatical accuracy with varied sentence structures.
The essay effectively addresses the task, providing a clear comparison of energy use and emissions.
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- Ensure all relevant data from the charts is included.
- Clarify comparisons between energy use and emissions when applicable.