The first chart shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
The pie chart illustrate the distribution of energy use and greenhouse gas emissions in Australian households.
Overall, heating accounts for the largest share of energy consumption, while water heating is the biggest contributor to greenhouse gas emissions. Additionally, refrigeration and other appliances contribute more to emissions than their share of energy usage.
In terms of energy consumption, heating is the most significant category, making up 42% of total usage. Water heating follows with 30%, while other appliances account for 14%. Refrigeration and lighting use 7% and 4% of energy, respectively, while cooling has the smallest share at only 2%.
On the other hand, water heating is the primary source of greenhouse gas emissions, responsible for 32% of the total. Other appliances generate 28%, which is higher than their energy consumption. Refrigeration contributes 14%, whereas heating, despite being the largest consumer of energy, only produces 15% of emissions. Lighting and cooling have the smallest shares at 8% and 3%, respectively.
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