The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates how the monthly prices of copper, nickel, and zinc changed on average over the course of 2014.
Overall, all three metals experienced fluctuations throughout the year, with nickel showing the most significant changes. While copper and zinc followed a relatively similar trend, nickel displayed sharper variations.
In January, the price of nickel rose sharply by 6%, the highest increase for any metal during the year. However, this was followed by a consistent decline, reaching -2% in June. From July to December, nickel prices fluctuated around zero, showing no major recovery.
Copper and zinc followed a similar pattern. Zinc started the year with slight increases, peaking in February at about 3%. After that, their prices gradually fell, reaching the lowest point of around -1% in June. Copper remained relatively stable from January to December. By the end of the year, both metals showed a slight recovery, with zinc ending slightly higher than copper.
In summary, nickel exhibited the most dramatic changes in price, while copper and zinc showed steadier trends with similar movements over the year.
The essay is logically organized with clear progression. Ideas are connected effectively, but transitions could be smoother.
Suggestions
- Use more varied linking words to enhance flow.
- Ensure each paragraph transitions smoothly to the next.
- Clarify the relationship between trends.
The vocabulary is appropriate and varied. However, there is room for more precise and varied expressions.
The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures with minor errors.
The essay effectively summarizes the main features and makes relevant comparisons. It addresses all parts of the task.
Suggestions
- Include more specific data points to support descriptions.
- Ensure all trends are clearly explained.