The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph compares three regions in terms of their exports of wheat between 1985 and 1990.
Overall, it can be seen that the numbers of exportations of both Canada and European Community rose with some fluctuations while the export in Australia fell over the time.
Looking at the information in more detail, the number of exported wheat in Australia started at 15 million tons in 1985 followed by rose slightly by 1 million, in 1986, before gradually decreasing over the period, becoming the least exported country with roughly 13 million tons in 1990.
When it comes to Canada, the figure of exportation stood initially at just under 20 million tons in 1985. However, this number dropped to about 17 million in the following year. Then, it dropped to well under 15 million tons of exported wheat after reaching a peak at 25 million in 1988, finally rating about 18 million tons in 1990.
As for the wheat export of European Community, the number stood at about 17 million. After experiencing a small, this figure levelled at 15 million tons prior to surging gradually to approximately 20 million tons, recording the highest export in the final year.
The essay generally follows a logical structure, but there are some inconsistencies in the flow of information.
Suggestions
- Ensure logical progression of ideas.
- Use linking words and phrases more effectively.
- Clarify comparisons between regions.
The essay uses a range of vocabulary, but some word choices are awkward or repetitive.
The essay demonstrates a range of grammatical structures but contains some errors and awkward constructions.
The essay addresses the task requirements and accurately describes the graph, but lacks some detail in analysis.
Suggestions
- Include more specific data points to support descriptions.
- Enhance the comparison between regions.