The graph below shows the number of immigrants to three countries from 1990 to 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the number of immigrants in USA, CANADA and AFRICA in 11-year-period.
Overall, immigration to USA saw a sharp drop over the period, while CANADA and AUSTRALIA remained stable with low numbers of immigrants, at the end Canada hit a peak.
In 1991, immigration to USA was around 1400 and reahed a peak to 1800 in 2001. In 1993, number of immigrants to USA dramatically declined from 1800 to 600 and slightly go up in 1997. It remained stable between 1999 and 2000 before rising again.
In contract, CANADA and AFRICA levelled off at around 200 over a period until CANADA doubled to 400 in 2001.
The essay provides a basic overview of the trends but lacks detailed comparisons and clear organization.
Suggestions
- Use clear paragraphing to separate different countries’ trends.
- Make more explicit comparisons between the countries.
- Ensure logical progression of ideas.
The vocabulary is basic and lacks variety, with some errors in word choice.
The essay contains grammatical errors and lacks complex structures.
The essay addresses the task but lacks detailed analysis and accurate representation of data.
Suggestions
- Provide more detailed data analysis.
- Ensure accurate representation of peak years and values.
- Include all relevant countries in the analysis.