The graph below shows the percentage of Australian export to four countries from 1990 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates changes in Australian exports to four different countries between 1990 and 2012. Overall, while Japan was the main importer of Australia for a long period, China’s exports grew significantly and became the largest figure.
In 1990, Japan was the dominant figure with 25% of Australia’s exports. This figure experienced steady decline over the 15-year’ period, which accounted for only about 17% in 2012. As for China’s imports, it started with the lowest percentages, steadily increasing to the top. By the end of the period, China had overtaken Japan with just over 27%, being the highest figure on the chart.
Until 2000, the US imports, with some fluctuations, remained close at 10%, dropping to 5% and showing a slight increase to about 6%. India started with merely 3% of exports, which showed a small rise to 7%. However, this peak wasn’t maintained, and India’s exports declined to 5% by the end of the period, the lowest among the four countries.
The information is arranged logically, and there is clear progression throughout the essay. The use of cohesive devices is effective, and paragraphs are well-structured, making the essay easy to follow.
The essay demonstrates a good range of vocabulary and uses some less common lexical items appropriately. However, there are a few instances of awkward or incorrect word choice that could be improved.
The essay uses a variety of complex structures and sentences. However, there are a few grammatical errors that could be corrected for improved clarity.
The essay provides a clear overview and detailed support for the data presented in the graph. The task is well-covered with relevant and specific information.