The graph below shows the production of three forest industry products in a European country, namely timber, pulp, and paper from 1980 to 2000.
The line chart compares the production of three forest industry goods ( timber,pulp, and paper) in a European country between 1989 and 2000. Overall, all three goods experienced increases in their production, with a much more pronounced growth being observed in paper. It is also evident that the paper’s production reached a peak, than the other two goods throughout the period.
The figure for production of pulp began around 6 million tons in 1980, and there was a steady growth to around 7 million tons in 1985. Then, the figure remained stable for a decade before it saw a significant increase to 10 million tons at the end of the period.
Regarding timber production started at 5 million tons in 1980, whereas doubled five years later. Afterwards, the figure oscillated between 8 and 6 MT between 1985 and 1995 before settling at just below roughly 8 MT by the end of the period.
Concerning the figure for paper production bucked the foregoing trend. It stood at 4 MT, yet there was a considerable increase to 9 MT in 1995. Then, it continued to grow and ended the period with a peak at 12 MT in 2000.
The essay is logically organized, but there are some inconsistencies in the timeline and data interpretation.
Suggestions
- Ensure accurate representation of data from the graph.
- Maintain consistency in time references.
- Use clear linking phrases for better flow.
The vocabulary is appropriate, but there are minor errors in word choice and phrasing.
The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, but there are some inaccuracies.
The essay addresses the task but contains inaccuracies in data representation and time period.
Suggestions
- Ensure all data accurately reflects the graph.
- Correct any discrepancies in the timeline.