The graph gives information about the quantity of goods transported by four different types of delivery
The graph gives information about the quantity of goods transported by four different ways in the United Kingdom in the years 1974-2002.
Overall, road was the most preferred mode of transportation for importing goods throughout the period, while the pipeline was the least used transportation type.
Looking at the details, in 1974 less than 75 million tonnes of products were delivered in the UK via roads, while water started at almost 40, and then both figures became more and more popular. However, water witnessed a considerable decline in 1998 when the road nearly reached the peak.
Despite starting at 5 million tonnes, pipeline then increased significantly to 23 million tonnes. By contrast, railway transport started at 40 million and fluctuated until the end.
The essay is logically organized and presents a clear overview. The information flows well, and there is effective use of cohesive devices. However, there could be better use of paragraphing.
Suggestions
- Consider using a wider range of linking words and phrases to show more complex relationships between ideas.
The essay uses a good range of vocabulary and there is some evidence of collocation. However, there are a few instances of informal language.
The essay uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms and there are only minor errors. However, there are a few instances of incorrect verb tense.
The essay provides a clear overview and detailed information. The essay meets the task requirements and provides a clear overview of the data.
Suggestions
- Make sure to accurately interpret the data and avoid making assumptions that are not supported by the data.