The graph shows the actual and predicted percentage change in employment in the UK, by education level.
The graph provides information about how the percentage of employment in the UK has changed between 1990 and 2025, based on four educational levels.
Overall, the employment proportion for people with bachelor’s and master’s degrees increase steadily throughout the period, while the rates for those with no school certificate and high school education decline consistently.
The percentage of people with a bachelor’s or master’s degree in employment increases strongly after 2005. from this point, the employment rate for bachelor’s degree holders rises sharply, while the rate for master’s degree holders grows steadily. before 2005 the employment rate for bachelor’s degrees fluctuates slightly but then continues to grow consistently until 2025.
On the other hand, the percentage of people with no school certificate or only a high school education decreases over time. for those without a school certificate, the decline is steady and smooth. similarly, the employment rate for high school graduates falls continuously, especially after 2005, and this trend is expected to continue until 2025.
The essay is logically organized and presents a clear overview of the data. However, some transitions between ideas could be improved for better flow.
Suggestions
- Use more linking words to enhance flow.
- Clarify the sequence of events where possible.
The essay uses a range of vocabulary relevant to the topic. However, there are some minor errors and room for more varied expressions.
The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures with minor errors.
The essay effectively summarizes the main trends and provides a clear overview of the data.
Suggestions
- Consider adding more specific data points for precision.