The graphs of the plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate the current layout of an airport and its planned redevelopment next year. The key changes involve a significant expansion of gates and the addition of several new passenger facilities.
Overall, the redevelopment will significantly expand the number of gates from nine to eighteen. Furthermore, the project will introduce new amenities in both the arrivals and departures areas, including car hire facilities, ATMs, and retail outlets.
The departures area will see an increase of two gates, and the check-in desks will be relocated to the space currently occupied by a coffee shop, adjacent to the main entrances. In contrast, the arrivals area will undergo a significant transformation. Currently undeveloped, this area will feature a car hire facility, an ATM, and a coffee shop located between the arrival gates and passport control. Finally, a new sky train system will be constructed, connecting zones one and eighteen to zones nine and ten, which are currently walkways. This addition will significantly improve passenger flow and accessibility across the airport.
The essay is logically organized and ideas are connected well. However, there are a few areas where the flow of information could be improved.
Suggestions
- Use a variety of cohesive devices to improve the flow of information.
- Consider using more complex sentence structures to introduce and explain the changes.
The essay uses a good range of vocabulary and there is evidence of less common and idiomatic language. However, there are a few instances of informal or non-lexical language that should be revised.
The essay uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms and there are very few grammatical errors. However, there are a few instances of awkward or incorrect phrasing that should be revised.
The essay addresses all parts of the task and presents a clear overview of the main trends, differences or stages. The essay also includes relevant details and examples. However, the essay could be improved by providing a more detailed comparison of the current and planned layouts of the airport.
Suggestions
- Provide a more detailed comparison of the current and planned layouts of the airport.
- Use a wider range of language to describe spatial relationships and processes.