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The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The line graph presents information on the changes in three types of fast food consumption among youth in Australia between the years 1975 and 2000.
Overall, among three food items,Hamburgers had been the most prevalent for the entire period. Also, a significantly larger percentage of Hamburgers and Pizza consumed by youngsters in Australia while the opposite happened to Fish and Chips.
Turning to the details, in 1975,the average teenager in Australia consumed just 100 times of Fish and Chips per year.In comparision,the yearly averages for Hamburgers and Pizza stood at approximately 10 and 8 times,respectively. In the following ten years, the intake of Fish and Chips saw an decrease with a fluctuation and had dropped about 95 times by 1985, while the consumption of Hamburgers had increased sharply to just over 80 times by the same year.Meanwhile,Pizza had eaten about 30 times more than its initial number.
In 1995,the average figure for Hamburgers peaked at 100 times by its consumers which it is notably the highest amount in the entire graph.In the meantime,Pizza eaters’ number reached to nearly 84 times and from this percentage both Hamburgers and Pizza consumption stayed constant.Fish and Chips,on the other hand,had seen a decrease dramatically to under 40 times by the eventual year.

5.5

The essay presents information in a logical order, but some transitions and connections between ideas could be clearer.

Suggestions
  • Use more linking words to enhance flow.
  • Clarify comparisons for better understanding.
  • Ensure each paragraph has a clear focus.

The essay uses a range of vocabulary but lacks precision in some areas.

The essay contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing.

The essay addresses the task but lacks some clarity and detail in comparisons.

Suggestions
  • Include more specific data points for clarity.
  • Ensure all main trends are highlighted.
  • Clarify comparisons between food types.