The line graph shows the level of satisfaction with health care system in four countries from 1991 to 2007.
The graph shows how people felt about healthcare in Canada, the UK, the Netherlands, and the US in 1991, 1998, and 2007.
Overall, the Netherlands had the best satisfaction, and the US had the worst. The UK’s satisfaction went up, while Canada’s went down and then up again.
In Canada, satisfaction was highest in 1991 at 60%. It dropped to 30% in 1998, and then went up to 50% in 2007, but it didn’t reach the 1991 level. The Netherlands had high satisfaction all the time, starting at 47% in 1991 and going up to 60% in 2007.
The UK’s satisfaction increased from 40% in 1991 to 45% in 1998 and 55% in 2007. The US had the lowest satisfaction, starting at 10% in 1991, then going up to 15% in 1998, and 20%in 2007.
The essay is logically organized and presents a clear overview. However, the flow of information could be improved by using more cohesive devices and by making clearer connections between the different parts of the analysis.
Suggestions
- Use a wider range of cohesive devices to improve the flow of information.
- Make sure to clearly connect the different parts of your analysis.
The essay uses a sufficient range of vocabulary and there is evidence of less common and idiomatic usage. However, there are a few instances of awkward or incorrect word choice.
The essay uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, and the majority of sentences are error-free. However, there are a few minor errors that do not impede communication.
The essay provides a clear overview of the information and makes logical connections between the different parts of the analysis. However, the essay could be improved by providing more detailed explanations and by making more in-depth comparisons between the data.
Suggestions
- Provide more detailed explanations and aAnalysis of the data.
- Make more in-depth comparisons between the different sets of data.