The line graph shows the level of satisfaction with health care system in four countries from 1991 to 2007.
The line graph compares the proportion of gratification from patients with health care system in four different countries between 1991 and 2007.
Overall, while the US and the UK showed an upward trend in terms of satisfaction from hospitality, the reverse was true for Canada. Moreover, Netherlands remained stable throughout the period compared to other nations.
Focusing on countries where the level of contentment from the system of health care was lower, the UK started at 24% in 1991, a figure that then rose slightly to 27% in 1998. Then, it continued its trajectory, reaching 29% in the final year. As for the US, before a minimal increase was observed at 11% in 1998, it represented smattering of 10% at the beginning of the period in terms of satisfaction from residents with health organizations.
Canada and Netherlands, on the other hand, withessed higher percentage of gratification from citizens with medical centers. Starting at below 60% in 1991, a significant drop was observed with 19% in the rate of satisfaction in Canada in 1998, but this was followed by a phase of recovery at 40% in 2007. When it comes to Netherlands, the level of contentment was 48% in 1991, after which it showed a period of plateau till the end of span with the first index.
The essay is logically organized and presents a clear overview. The use of cohesive devices is effective, and there is a good range of linking words. However, there are a few areas where the flow of information could be improved.
Suggestions
- Consider using a wider range of cohesive devices to improve the flow of information.
- Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and that all sentences in the paragraph relate to this topic.
The essay uses a good range of vocabulary and there is evidence of less common and idiomatic language. However, there are a few instances of awkward or incorrect word choice.
The essay uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms and there are few grammatical errors. However, there are a few instances of awkward or incorrect sentence structure.
The essay provides a clear overview of the information and makes appropriate comparisons. The key features are identified and supported with relevant data. However, the essay could be improved by providing more detailed analysis and explanation.
Suggestions
- Try to provide more detailed analysis and explanation in your writing. This could involve discussing the reasons for the trends or making comparisons with other data.