The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph gives information about the proportion of Australian exports with namely countries China,Japan, US, India exports with countries . Overall, the percentages of exports countries China a dramatically rose Japan a considerably increased Us and India declined exports
China export things a slightly declined 5% in 1990 years and this followed by a slightly rose 6% in 1995 years after which a considerably incrased 10% in 2000 years starting at.
China dramatically rose 15% in 2005 years after which a considerably increased to 2010 until 2012 years Japan a considerably rose 25% in 1990 years and this was followed by a slightly declined 20% in 1995 years starting at remain steady 15% from 2000 until 2012 years US exports items a fluctuation 10% in 1990 years and this was followed by a slightly declined 5% from 2010 to 2012 years India exports countries a stay constant 3% in 1990 years after which an ocillaction declined 5% from 1995 untill 2012 years
The essay lacks clear structure and logical flow. The information is presented in a disorganized manner, making it difficult to follow.
Suggestions
- Organize the essay into paragraphs with clear topic sentences.
- Use linking words to guide the reader through the text.
- Summarize key trends and make comparisons clearly.
The essay uses limited vocabulary and lacks variety. Some word choices are incorrect or awkward.
The essay contains numerous grammatical errors, affecting readability and coherence.
The essay attempts to describe the graph but lacks detailed analysis and comparisons. Key features are not clearly highlighted.
Suggestions
- Identify and describe key trends in the data.
- Make relevant comparisons between the countries.
- Include specific data points to support descriptions.