The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.
The map below provides data about changes in one village of Ryemouth over a period of 30years.
In general, as can be seen, the main alternatives are in farmland, forest park and fishing port. Farmland changed to golf court and forest park replaced by buildings for tennis. While fishing port demolished.
Starting from western areas, houses have expanded. In the southwest, shops converted into restaurants and apartments have replaced with fish markets. The fishing port was located in the sea, but, it has been removed now. When it comes to northern east,farmland and forest park transformed into golf court and tennis buildings. Meanwhile, in the southern east car park has constructed near the hotel during the given time period.
Nevetheless, some places remained unchanged. Hotel and cafe stayed the same between 1995 and 2025.
The essay provides a general overview of the changes in Ryemouth but lacks clear organization and smooth transitions between ideas.
Suggestions
- Use clearer paragraphing to separate different parts of the map.
- Include linking words to improve the flow of information.
- Provide a clear introduction and conclusion.
The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks variety and precision.
The essay contains several grammatical errors and lacks complex sentence structures.
The essay addresses the task but lacks detailed descriptions and some inaccuracies are present.
Suggestions
- Provide more specific details about changes.
- Ensure accuracy in describing map features.