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The maps below give information about a plan to redevelop an industrial site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps illustrate the current layout of an industrial site and its plan for future redevelopment.
Overall, the plan calls for the total demolition of all the current premises, with new residential facilities replacing them, as result of which the site will be transformed into a housing area.
Currently, the site accommodates a few industrial and working facilities. It can be entered through Chimney Road on the north, via a reception block that leads to the inner yard. The factory itself is located on the eastern side of the area, parallel to Pie Walk, while on the opposite side, on the west, there is a parking area, overlooking Toe Lane. On the far side of the area, on the south, there is a storage and two rows of office blocks with a canteen nearby.
After the redevelopment has taken place, the site will become a residential area. The factory will be knocked down to build an apartment block with a parking area to the north. Where the current parking lot is situated, there will be three and four-bedroom houses, whereas three two-bedroom houses, in front of which a communal garden will be located is going to be constructed along with Chimney Road. The area where the office block stands now will be taken by parking garages. All the premises will be connected with each other through private roads.

7.5

The essay is generally well-organized with clear progression of ideas. It effectively uses linking words to connect sentences and paragraphs.

Suggestions
  • Ensure all comparisons between the current and future layouts are clear and explicit.

The essay demonstrates a good range of vocabulary with some precise word choices.

The essay shows a good range of grammatical structures with few errors.

The essay effectively covers the main features of the redevelopment plan, with relevant comparisons between the current and future layouts.

Suggestions
  • Include more specific details about changes to enhance task achievement.