The maps below show the seaside town of Tendiff as it was in 1990 and 2010.
The maps compare the layout of Tendiff’s seaside town in 1990 and its layout in 2010. Overall, the town experienced significant changes with the addition of new facilities. It is also clear that the construction of a new road, called “Sandhill,” was a major change in this seaside city.
In 1990, there was only one road, called “Spraymount,” with several amenities on both sides of the road. While there were the ABC Hotel, a café, and a shop to the north of the road, a Seaview Hotel, arcade, and fast food restaurant were located on the other side of Spraymount Road. Additionally, the Atlantic Ocean had four different beaches: Brown, Grey, Diamond, and White.
After the transformation, the town underwent notable changes with the addition of new facilities. Due to the addition of Sandhill Road, new buildings were introduced across the road, including the King and Family Hotel. Moreover, a police station was built to the northwest of the road, while a solar farm was placed in the southwest of the map.
Along Spraymount Road, although some buildings remained unchanged in their original places, like the ABC Hotel, café, and fast food restaurant, some changes occurred. The Seaview Hotel, for instance, was destroyed, while the arcade was turned into a supermarket. Finally, the shop was removed to make way for the seafood restaurant.
The essay is logically organized with a clear comparison between 1990 and 2010. Transitions are used effectively to guide the reader.
Suggestions
- Ensure all changes are clearly linked to their effects on the town’s layout.
The essay uses a range of vocabulary effectively, with some instances of repetition.
The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures with minor errors.
The essay effectively addresses the task, summarizing the main features and making relevant comparisons.
Suggestions
- Include more specific details about the changes to the beaches.