The maps below show university sports courts in 1990 and now.
The diagrams compare the layout of a university sports courts in 1990 and present view.
Overall, it is clear that the university sports courts have seen several transformations, with an introduction of a new basketball court and a fitness center. Although the total arrangements have stayed unchanged, the university sports courts have changed significantly, and have become a modern area.
In 1990, there was a park on the top left side, but it was demolished, and a new basketball court has been introduced in the same position of the park. Furthermore, the tennis court has been doubled, and replaced in the location of the car park, which was below the park, while a completely new fitness center has been built in the previous place of the tennis court.
One interesting change is that an outdoor pool has been converted into an indoor pool to make in order to use it in all seasons. Finally, although the changing room has only repositioned and a bit enlarged, the café and the reception areas have been stayed unchanged.
The essay provides a clear overview of the changes but lacks smooth transitions between ideas and some sentences are awkwardly structured.
Suggestions
- Use more cohesive devices to link ideas smoothly.
- Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central idea.
- Improve the flow between sentences.
The essay uses a range of vocabulary accurately, though some expressions are awkward.
The essay demonstrates a reasonable range of grammatical structures, but there are some errors and awkward constructions.
The essay addresses the task effectively, describing the key changes and providing a clear overview.
Suggestions
- Include more specific details about the changes.
- Ensure all key features are clearly highlighted.