The maps below show university sports courts in 1990 and now.
The maps shown below demonstrate sports courts located in a particular university in 1990 and now.
Overall, there have been some transformations , including the addition of a basketball court, a car park and a fitness Centre, with the tennis court and the changing room later relocated to another place.
In 1990, there was a park and a car park situated close to each other. Furthermore, the sports court had an outdoor pool next to the cafe and the reception, beside which the changing room was located.
When it comes to the current formation of the sports court, there is now used to be a basketball court instead of the park, with the tennis court being restructured in the former place of the car park. The outdoor pool was substituted for an indoor pool. The court currently possesses a new facility – fitness centre beside the new location of the changing room.
The essay is generally well-organized but lacks some clarity in the transitions between past and present descriptions.
Suggestions
- Use clearer transitional phrases to distinguish between 1990 and now.
- Ensure each sentence logically follows the previous one.
- Clarify the sequence of changes.
The essay uses a range of vocabulary appropriately but could benefit from more varied expressions.
The essay demonstrates a satisfactory range of grammar but contains some errors and awkward phrasing.
The essay addresses the task effectively, describing the changes shown in the maps.
Suggestions
- Ensure all key changes are clearly described.
- Provide a more detailed overview of the changes.