The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day.
The maps illustrate the changes made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day.
Overall, the campus has been expanded and modernized, with more accommodation and academic buildings added. The lake and recreational area have been preserved, maintaining a balance between functionality and leisure.
In 2010, the campus included two student accommodations, university offices, a teaching block for arts and science, a lake with a lawn, shops, and a restaurant.
By now, a third student accommodation block has been added, and the university offices and shops have been consolidated into a single building. The teaching block has been divided into separate arts and science buildings, and a new science facility has replaced part of the lawn.
The essay is logically organized and easy to follow. There is a clear progression of ideas from past to present.
Suggestions
- Use more linking words to enhance flow.
- Add a concluding sentence to summarize changes.
The essay uses a good range of vocabulary with some variety in word choice.
The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures with few errors.
The essay addresses the task effectively, covering the major changes shown in the maps.
Suggestions
- Include more detail about specific changes to the recreational area.