The number of motorbikes per 1,000 inhabitants in eight countries in 1990 and 2000

The table shows how many motor vehicles were used by every 1,000 people of eight countries in the years 1990 and 2000.
Overall, the number of motorbikes increased among the six countries, particularly in Brazil and Romania, while the reverse was true for Bahammas. It is also worth noting that Cambodia was the only country, where motorcycles almost no used during the timeframe.
The significant number of motor vehicles were obtained by Brazil and Romania’s inhabitants. To be specific, in 1990, the former country’s people had 55 motorbikes and the latter was 10 more motor vehicles, respectively. By 2010, Brazilians’ motorcycle possession rose to 135,80, whereas the figure for Romanian grew to 8,012, followed by Luxembourg’s local people with 728 motorbikes.
As regarded to the other countries, where saw small growth in terms of using motor vehicles. New Zealand and Chile’s residents, for example, nearly 20 more motorbikes used by 2000, which were 531 and 68 motorcycles in previous period. However, motor vehicles possession rate were skyrocketed to 157 in 2000 from 50 in 1990 by the population of Jordan.

6.5

The essay is logically organized and presents a clear overview. However, there are some issues with the flow of information and the use of cohesive devices.

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Use a variety of cohesive devices to improve the flow of information.
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and that all sentences in the paragraph relate to this topic.

The essay uses a range of vocabulary and there is some evidence of less common and idiomatic language. However, there are a few instances of awkward or incorrect word choice.

The essay makes use of a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, and the majority of sentences are grammatically correct. However, there are a few errors that affect the clarity of the writing.

The essay provides a clear overview of the information and makes specific comparisons where relevant. However, the essay could be improved by providing more detailed explanations and by making more specific comparisons.