The number of tourists visiting a Caribbean island between 2010-2017.
The graph provides information about the number of visitors in Caribbean island over the period 2010 and 2017.
Overall, tourists who preferred cruise ship and island increased over the years, while the former grow dramatically and the latter saw a minimal increase with two drops over the period in question.
As is presented in the graph, cruise ships hosted a fourth millions visitors in the very beginning in 201 and then the figure fluctuated mildly next three years, before witnessing gradual growth until 2017, reaching its peak with two millions of visitors. Travelers of island, on the other hand, remained unchanged during the first year, before surging from 0,7 million to 1,5 million between 2011 and 2013. Afterwards, the number of visitors on island leveled off during the following two years, before dropping slightly in 2016. The next year it recovered and reached 1,5 million.
As is observed from the graph the total number of people witnessed a gradual improvement over the period given in question, with one year staying stable between 2015 and 2016. Before reaching its peak with 3.5 million visitors
The essay presents information in a logical order, but there are some issues with clarity and flow.
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The essay uses a range of vocabulary, but there are some inaccuracies and repetitions.
The essay contains several grammatical errors and awkward sentence structures.
The essay addresses the task but lacks some detail and accuracy.
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