The picture below illustrate paper is made

The picture shows the process of recycling.
Overall, the process comprises four main stages (making pulp, filtering, cleaning, and making paper). Starting from making pulp from used paper, through filtering and cleaning to completely recycled paper. The process is a complex one, which requires much time and special equipment to complete.
The process begins with the used paper being conveyed on a belt into a large dish that has water and chemicals in it, and this helps to clean the paper. Then, it is filtered to eliminate germs. After, the filtered pulp is placed in a container with water, soap, and air to expel inks. During this stage, an air pump is installed, creating bubbles so that the ink rises to the surface, from where the ink is then removed through another pipe. This step is essential to ensure the pulp is free from any residual printing substances.
The process then moves to the final stage, during which clean pulp is passed through heated rollers for water loss. After this step, the paper is ready for use.

7.5

The essay is generally well-organized with a clear progression of ideas. The use of linking words helps maintain coherence, though some sentences could be connected more smoothly.

Suggestions

Use more varied linking words to enhance flow.
Ensure each stage is connected logically.
Avoid abrupt transitions between stages.

The essay uses a range of vocabulary related to the process, though some repetition is present. There is an attempt to use precise terms.

The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures with minor errors. Sentences are mostly well-formed and varied.

The essay adequately covers the stages of the paper recycling process as depicted in the diagram. All major stages are described with relevant details.