The pictures below show how tea is produced. They also illustrate the process of making a cup of tea.
The diagram depicts the process of producing and preparing a cup of tea. Overall, the process consists of 3 distinct stages: growing tea, delivering it to customers, and making a cup of tea at home. It is also noteworthy that the process is manual and simple, without special machinery.
In the first stage, individuals sow tea seeds in the regions of India and China, and they gradually grow into plants by being exposed to the sunshine. After they are fully grown and ripe, the leaves are harvested and placed in baskets manually. These freshly harvested leaves are then spread out and left to dry under direct sunlight to prepare them for further processing.
The second stage—distribution—involves packing the dried leaves into boxes and loading them onto a truck, after which they are transported to supermarkets, where customers can purchase the tea from these locations and take it home, making the end of the distribution phase.
Regarding the last stage, it begins at home, where the tea is prepared for consumption. The water is boiled utilizing an electric kettle. After being boiled, it is poured into a cup with a tea bag inside, and the tea is left for two minutes to cool off. Having been left for two minutes, additional ingredients, such as some milk and sugar, can be added to tea according to personal preference so that people can consume their drink and enjoy it.
The essay is well-organized, with a clear progression through the stages of tea production and preparation. However, some transitions between stages could be smoother.
Suggestions
- Improve transitions between stages.
- Use more varied linking words.
The essay uses a good range of vocabulary relevant to the topic, though it could benefit from more variety and precision in word choice.
The essay demonstrates a good control of grammar, with a variety of sentence structures and few errors.
The essay effectively covers the main stages of tea production and preparation as illustrated in the diagram. It provides a clear overview and detailed descriptions of each stage.