The pictures gives information about recycling process of aluminium cans
“The diagram below illustrates the recycling process of aluminum cans. First, used cans are thrown into trash bins by humans. Collection trucks then pick up this trash and transport it to a cleaning center. Next, the garbage undergoes cleaning, shredding, and compressing. After that, it is melted to form new material, mixed with fresh water.
The new aluminum sheets are rolled and covered with bright paper, which is 2.5mm to 6mm thick. Finally, these recycled bottles are sent to markets and sold by sellers.
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