The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Fairmont Island, according to a survey of visitors.
Due to visitors’ opinions, pie charts compare common pros and cons of Fairmont Island.
Overall, according to the survey, almost half of all visitors complained about living expenditure, followed by the weather and entertainment, fewer surveyed visitors gave complaints about food quality. Moreover, when visitors were asked about the advantages of an Island, most of them commented positively about society and view, but the culture and accommodations were underrated figures in the survey.
Focusing on the common disadvantages first, living expenses is the figure which gained more complaints, accounting for 45%. The weather and entertainment facilities are at the second and third stages in the proportion of votes, with 30% and 20%, respectively. The quality of food is the aspect, for which the least visitors voted as disadvantages, at 5%.
As for the advantages, the inhabitants of Fairmont Island made good impressions on visitors, more, the figure for landscape was a bit lower to compare with the people, the former 37%, the latter 40%. Accommodation and culture were the aspects at the lower point in the survey list with a small difference, by 1%, according to visitors’ opinions, the higher figure Culture was at 12 percent.
The essay presents data from the pie charts in a structured manner, but there are instances where the flow could be improved for better clarity.
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- Use more linking words to connect ideas.
- Ensure that the sequence of information is logical.
- Avoid repetition of similar ideas.
The essay uses a range of vocabulary relevant to the topic, though some expressions could be more precise.
The essay demonstrates a reasonable range of grammatical structures, though there are some errors and awkward phrasing.
The essay addresses the task by summarizing the main features of the pie charts and making some comparisons.
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- Include more detailed comparisons between advantages and disadvantages.