The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Fairmont Island according to a survey of visitors. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
According to the survey of Fairmont, the pie charts show the proportions of the most common benefits and drawbacks.
Overall, payment for living is the most common drawback while quality of meal is the least common one. The combined percentages of weather and entertainment equal another half of the pie chart. Most common advantage is the people while the lowest good apartment.
The most common disadvantage is expensiveness of apartments by 45% while the least common disadvantage is poor food quality, the sum of two components is 50% or half of the chart. According to survey there are also 2 downsides, such as, weather by 20% and entertainment by 30% and also the sum of 2 components equals to another half of the chart.
The most common benefit is people by 40% while the lowest one is good housing by 11%, but the advantage of the culture is a bit more than the good housing, the culture by 12. Additionally, the benefit of the scenery is 3% less than the advantage of the people.
The essay presents information in a logical order but lacks clear connections between ideas.
Suggestions
- Use linking words to connect ideas.
- Ensure each paragraph has a clear focus.
- Summarize findings clearly in the conclusion.
The essay uses a limited range of vocabulary with some repetition.
The essay contains some grammatical errors and lacks complex structures.
The essay addresses the task but lacks detailed analysis and comparison.
Suggestions
- Provide more detailed comparisons.
- Include specific data points for clarity.
- Ensure all main features are summarized effectively.