The pie charts show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors.
The pie charts present the results of a survey on the common benefits and drawbacks of Bowen Island. In general, it is clear that going to this island is more appreciated for its local people and the scenery, making up 42% and 35%, respectively. The disadvantages, on the other hand, are the high living expenses and the pursuit of pleasure.
The island is primarily appreciated for its friendly locals and stunning scenery. One of these reasons is appreciated by 42% of visitors, while the stunning view of the island is a draw for 35%. Cultural factors contribute to about 11% of the visitors’ satisfaction, related to the ease of finding accommodation. Nevertheless, a good culture is a little different from comfortable accommodation reached at 12%.
In terms of disadvantages, the primary factor is the high cost of living. 50% of respondents claimed high expenses are what make them frustrated. The second most common reason is the island’s charm, which attracts half as many visitors as the first reason. This reason, the island’s charm, accounts for about 25% of the visitors’ satisfaction. The cost of living is by far the most significant drawback of visiting this island. The other two drawbacks are the quality of food and the weather. Food quality is a concern for 15% of the visitors, while weather is a less significant factor, accounting for only 10%.
The essay is logically organized and ideas are connected well. The use of cohesive devices is effective, and the information is presented in a clear and coherent manner.
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- Continue to practice maintaining coherence and cohesion in your writing.
The essay uses a wide range of vocabulary and there is evidence of less common and idiomatic usage. The vocabulary is used appropriately for the most part.
The essay uses a wide range of structures and there are few grammatical errors. Those that do exist do not impede communication.
The essay addresses all parts of the task and presents a clear overview of the main trends, differences or stages. The essay also includes relevant data from the pie charts.
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- Continue to provide a thorough analysis of the data presented in the charts, making sure to address all relevant points.