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The pie charts show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors.

The pie charts present the results of a survey on the common benefits and drawbacks of Bowen Island. In general, it is clear that going to this island is more appreciated for its local people and the scenery, making up 42% and 35%, respectively. The disadvantages, on the other hand, are the high living expenses and the pursuit of pleasure.
The two main attractions of the island are its friendly locals and stunning scenery. One of these reasons is appreciated by 42% of visitors, while the stunning view of the island is a draw for 35%. The absence of issues related to finding accommodation is equated with culture, accounting for approximately 11%. Nevertheless, a good culture is a little different from comfortable accommodation reached at 12%.
In terms of disadvantages, the primary factor is the high cost of living. 50% of respondents claimed high expenses are what make them frustrated. The second most common reason is the island’s charm, which attracts half as many visitors as the first reason. The latter is roughly half the size of the first (25%). The cost of living is by far the most significant drawback of visiting this island. The other two drawbacks are the quality of food and the weather. The poor quality of food accounts for 15%, whereas weather only makes up 10%.

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